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the undone notes of beauty are
f a d i n g
in the silence
as she looks out the window.

it's dark out,
it's way too dark,
but then she begins to see.

she sees only patterns,
s h a d o w s
flitting in her periphery
and scaring her.

but this is just-
like every other night...
she reminds herself.

there's always morning, but morning
is when the demons come into focus

[and sometimes the blurred images are safer].

sometimes

the inability to touch
the glaring eyes
and the inability to hear
the sharp words
is a relief.

so she sits patiently
and listens to the silence
as it explodes

into a chorus
that only she can hear.

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Dark, light. Both are enemy to the human mind.

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*KJ-Illustration Sep 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Hi :heart: Your beautiful piece has been featured in my August Feature: [link] :love: :hug:

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*KJ-Illustration Aug 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Oh my... I truly loved the picture you painted with your words, your imagery is really strong! Wonderful :heart:
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:iconmasvida:
Thank you so much!
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I like how you think. This is good.
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nice to see you trying out poetry, and not just prose. Tragically beautiful. :heart: You're one of my favorite writers dear. :huggle:
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nice to see you trying out poetry, and not just prose. Tragically beautiful. :heart: You're one of my favorite writers dear. :huggle:
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:iconmasvida:
Thank you SO MUCH! You're so sweet :heart:
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*meka7heaven Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This makes me feel. I approve of this poemn and I like your style as it is emotional and dark.
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